Hey there. Someone pointed out that the frozen dessert they ate last chapter was more of a sorbet than a sherbet and I agree. I’ve already changed it. Feel free to comment on anything that you find odd/wrong. Thanks!
Hey there. Someone pointed out that the frozen dessert they ate last chapter was more of a sorbet than a sherbet and I agree. I’ve already changed it. Feel free to comment on anything that you find odd/wrong. Thanks!
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Turning the gun left or right to quickly shoot somewhere else would be slowert since the force on the farthest end would drag the end your holding slightly in life and death situations seconds would matter
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